Lagenda Elfarren... (4)

Assalamualaikum...

First of all, i want to say thank you to some of my acquaintances and friends, notably Shu, Madan, Syamsul Hadi, Hasrul Hadi (two hadi,s huh) and several others for the reviews they gave on Lagenda Elfarren.
A couple of my friends even gave their reviews by phone and you know, that was really... cool and refreshing!
To all of them, thank you very much. It means a lot and i really appreciate it.

To tell the truth, there's a small part in me that is very defensive against changing my style of writing. But the better part of me realize that no way can the author judges his own writing/work. that is so self-centered!

So, i tried once again to make changes on the early chapters. For chapter 1, i was like.. stuck! So, i only made few changes. But for chapter 2, i made major changes by inserting a little 'flashback' that hopefully will bode well with the readers.
And one more thing, i also put the third chapter of LE as the mystery surrounding Aidan take a new twist.
Chapter 4, which is my favorite among the four will come soon after..

P/S: You can go Lagenda Elfarren site with the link listed at the sidebar...
Thank you...



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